My Poem Is Better Than Yours


It might seem disrespectful
To compare poems that we wrote
But in a poetry competition
Mine would get my vote

I’m not saying yours is bad,
I’m sure it is just fine
But alas it isn’t really
Quite as good as mine

No, I don’t think as a poet
You can compete with me
But I will try to teach you
To improve your poetry

No more soporific sonnets
Or repetitive refrains
Say goodbye to boring ballads
And quotidian quatrains

Metaphors are monsters
Holding back your verse
And as for snake-like similes
They are even worse

Alliterations are annoying
Personification looks askance
Bang goes onomatopoeia
Who can stand assonance?

You can enhance your work
By trying less hard to be smart
You don’t need all those tricks
Stop embellishing your art

Instead just keep things simple
And stick to this paradigm
It cannot be a poem
If it doesn’t even rhyme

  3 comments for “My Poem Is Better Than Yours

  1. March 28, 2018 at 9:28 pm

    To be briefly poetic:

    Hear, hear!

    Liked by 1 person

    • May 4, 2020 at 10:35 pm

      Wow! I’m in awe! I’m following your blog now so please follow mine too!

      Liked by 1 person

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