Once I wrote a poem and it wasn’t very good
I put it on this blog though I wasn’t sure I should
It was quite well-received even though it was so bad
It got more ‘likes’ than better posts and this made me sad
I wondered if it was worth putting much effort in
If my most ‘liked’ posts were ones I’d prefer to bin
On the other hand though, it gave me pause for thought
Perhaps I had been trying harder than I ought
And so bad poetry became a thing I’d write
When all my other musings seemed a little trite
I’ve butchered many forms, there’s not much I won’t do
Poor odes and awful limericks and vacuous haiku
But though they are all bad, I can still get much worse
For few horrors can compare to my attempts at free verse
And though this poem rhymes it isn’t any better
Though it is quite self-aware and possibly meta
Wow. Is that a self-portrait?
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The poem is. The picture less so…
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I wish I could save time
By writing more in rhyme.
Or three lines will do
Few words to view..
Ideas to test
So my readers can rest.
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I’d respond in kind
But today I find
I have less time
To write in rhyme
And so this will probably just peter our like this…
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I meant ol’ Billy Shakes.
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hey, that was good!
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We’re our own harshest critics although if I were to acknowledge that I thought this was good it would possibly diminish the poem so I have to remain ‘in character’ for now…
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Rough rhymes we expect,
Poor rhymes we accept,
But free verse?
The poets curse?
May I coarsely say
No intercoursing way?
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But the beauty of free verse
Is that
You can
Write something bland
Structure it
Like this
And call it free verse
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Free verse unfetteredly goes here
Free verse fickley goes there,
Let me be crystal clear
I freely say I don’t care.
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My dear old Nan always said to me ‘Talent will out’.
That’s when I knew that she didn’t like my poetry and my mate Will Out had more talent than me.
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But you’ve still got to show Will In.
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Oh, very droll, now my friend Moll
is neither in nor out
she’s somewhat undecided why
and can’t even think of a way to carry on with this verse which is not free as you will receive an invoice post haste. So there!
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Worth every penny. But not Penny who was unimpressed and refuses to pay.
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That last line speaks to my soul. I won’t tell you what it says, as I fear it would be inappropriate in polite company.
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Your discretion does you credit
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Than you.
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I think what’s interesting about all your writing is that the reader gets a sense of who you are, and you are interesting, primarily because you see the humour in simple things and you have an entertaining, unaffected voice. (I don’t mean to be so serious, but that is what I like about your writing.).
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That is actually lovely feedback and ‘humour in simple things’ is mostly what I’m trying to achieve
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