10 comments for “A Haiku That Tries To Justify Its Own Existence But Probably Fails To Do So”

  1. Mr Wild
    January 4, 2021 at 12:15 pm

    I thought you would go to any length to write poetry, but you’ve stopped short!

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    • James
      January 4, 2021 at 4:29 pm

      I was worried I’d overdone it to be honest

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  2. dumbestblogger
    January 4, 2021 at 1:42 pm

    I wonder if the haiku really possesses the self awareness to attempt to justify it’s own existence? If I was to engage in psychoanalytical analysis of this piece I would come to the conclusion that the writer is projecting his existential dread on an inamite piece of poetry, and that the poetry is making no effort one way or the other.

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    • James
      January 4, 2021 at 4:17 pm

      I think the mistake you have made is to engage in a psychoanalytical analysis of this piece.

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      • dumbestblogger
        January 4, 2021 at 4:52 pm

        To be fair, I did phrase it in a hypothetical manner. So I am not taking full ownership of my words.

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      • James
        January 4, 2021 at 7:28 pm

        You are wisdom personified

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  3. obbverse
    January 4, 2021 at 6:48 pm

    Have a nice day!
    May your happy heart sing
    As you do what you must do.

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    • James
      January 4, 2021 at 7:29 pm

      I probably did less than I should but my heart was in the right place

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  4. Mr. Ohh's Sideways View
    January 5, 2021 at 4:43 am

    If a haiku is what you have time for write a haiku. However if you shortened the titles a bit you might have time for a cinquain

    Make a resolution to Laugh

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    • James
      January 5, 2021 at 6:26 am

      I will take it under consideration

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