19 comments for “A Tanka That Mixes Milk Metaphors In A Largely Pretentious Effort To Appear Profound

  1. January 24, 2021 at 4:56 am


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    • January 24, 2021 at 11:41 am

      Although on balance we might prefer the ice cream of human kindness?

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  2. January 24, 2021 at 7:14 am

    As far as this metaphor is concerned, I would milk it for all it’s worth.

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  3. January 24, 2021 at 12:28 pm

    I see nothing gets past your eyes!

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    • January 24, 2021 at 1:33 pm

      I don’t know, for much of this pandemic I’ve been in tiers quite regularly

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  4. January 24, 2021 at 3:27 pm

    Personally, I only cry over spilt wine because wine makes me kinder:-)

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    • January 24, 2021 at 3:44 pm

      I would definitely cry over spilt wine

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  5. January 25, 2021 at 1:38 am

    This tanka suffers from a largely pretentious effort to appear profound.

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  6. January 25, 2021 at 4:04 am

    I have no milk pun nor witticism about the title. So Insert any one of the clever comments here and pretend I made it as well.

    Take heart and laugh

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  7. January 26, 2021 at 1:53 pm

    I’m not sure what to say about the poem so I’m switching the subject. I put a down payment on a puppy on the weekend and I’m getting him on February 28th!

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