24 comments for “A Haiku That Is Somewhat Self-Sabotaging In Both A Specific And Wider Context

  1. February 5, 2021 at 5:37 am

    No self loathing though!

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    • February 5, 2021 at 9:15 am

      I’m less angry with myself so much as disappointed

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  2. February 5, 2021 at 6:02 am

    I seem to be doing just that.

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    • February 5, 2021 at 9:15 am

      And I am a grateful hypocrite

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  3. February 5, 2021 at 7:55 am

    You wouldn’t have time to read any others anyway, We can all see you are probably working on your own posts nearly 24/7.

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    • February 5, 2021 at 11:10 am

      24 seconds roughly every seven days is about right yes.

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  4. February 5, 2021 at 8:08 am

    don’t feel obliged to
    read this reply as it may
    be a waste of time

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    • February 5, 2021 at 11:11 am

      I never read any of the comments. I always reply out of courtesy but if the reply matches the comment then it’s more by luck than judgment

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  5. February 5, 2021 at 8:24 am

    Not at all. a lot of stuff leaves me cold but I appreciate the effort that people have put in.

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    • February 5, 2021 at 11:12 am

      The I fear you over-appreciate my effort…

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  6. February 5, 2021 at 8:37 am

    If Basho had a blog, I’d read it.

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    • February 5, 2021 at 11:12 am

      I’d give it a go but I’d need help with the Japanese

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      • February 5, 2021 at 11:27 am

        I found a great book once that had his haikus in English, the Roman spellings of the Japanese, the kanji to write it and the hirogana to look it up…

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      • February 5, 2021 at 11:38 am

        I had to look two of those words up

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  7. DiosRaw
    February 5, 2021 at 10:01 am

    🔥

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  8. February 5, 2021 at 1:47 pm

    I only do it because it doesn’t require much effort.

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  9. February 5, 2021 at 2:07 pm

    I always have kids read poetry to the class for a public speaking grade. The presentation is to run 4 to 6 minutes. Years ago, a junior high student did a presentation entirely made up of haikus. The audience was mystified for minutes on end, and I sensed the presenter regretted the dreadful choice after having read about 4 haikus. I still laugh when I think about it.

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    • February 5, 2021 at 3:58 pm

      That’s why my posts are never more than one haiku

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      • February 5, 2021 at 7:14 pm

        Superb judgement, James. I could sense that’s why you limited it to one.

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    • February 5, 2021 at 6:10 pm

      They tend to wither and die seen outside the written element; They blur into syllableness.

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      • February 6, 2021 at 6:26 pm

        That’s exactly right. They just kind of flop on the ground once verbalized.

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  10. February 6, 2021 at 12:56 am

    Will I will. As long as the titles take up enough time to make it wort it.

    Laugh at yourself daily. Enjoy your life

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  11. fortheloveofhomeschool
    February 12, 2021 at 3:17 am

    Me neither

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