10 comments for “A Haiku That Regrets It Is Not A Better Haiku

  1. March 17, 2021 at 6:48 am

    True.

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  2. March 17, 2021 at 2:07 pm

    Learn from the royal family (and Steve Jobs)….. never explain, never apologise.
    Expressing regret counts as neither, so that is probably OK…. although Edith Piaf would argue the point.
    In fact, I feel inclined to advise you to stay schtum and carry on.

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    • March 17, 2021 at 10:07 pm

      I often live to regret things

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  3. March 17, 2021 at 2:14 pm

    I live in hope!

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    • March 17, 2021 at 10:00 pm

      It’s the hope that kills you

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  4. March 17, 2021 at 5:00 pm

    You know, I think it’s a pretty good haiku — with shades of elegance even.

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    • March 17, 2021 at 10:01 pm

      But not fifty shades I’d imagine

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  5. March 18, 2021 at 2:43 am

    This is perfection. the haiku that explains haikus. The proverbial wheel within a wheel. I applaud your efforts. Now I expect Ten quid for this review

    Laughter can move mountains

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