The noble haiku
Can be truly elegant
When done properly
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James Proclaims! 
10 responses to “A Haiku That Regrets It Is Not A Better Haiku”
True.
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Honesty is the best policy
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Learn from the royal family (and Steve Jobs)….. never explain, never apologise.
Expressing regret counts as neither, so that is probably OK…. although Edith Piaf would argue the point.
In fact, I feel inclined to advise you to stay schtum and carry on.
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I often live to regret things
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I live in hope!
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It’s the hope that kills you
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You know, I think it’s a pretty good haiku — with shades of elegance even.
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But not fifty shades I’d imagine
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This is perfection. the haiku that explains haikus. The proverbial wheel within a wheel. I applaud your efforts. Now I expect Ten quid for this review
Laughter can move mountains
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I admire your expectations
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