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I wrote this on a train
It was poetry in motion
The train was running late
Which filled me with emotion

The emotion, though, was joy
For I was late as well
My tardiness well-timed
I didn’t have to dwell

Better still, I got a seat
An unexpected perk
As I headed to my course
And an afternoon off work

I didn’t hold much hope
That my course would not be dull
But at least the journey there
Was semi-reasonable

So I took out my pen
And wrote this little ditty
While heading at high-speed
On a train into the city

12 responses to “Poetry In (Loco)Motion”

    1. Thanks – that’s great to hear 😊

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  1. Useful things, train journeys. I’ll bet that’s how T.S. Eliot and Robert Frost got started.

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    1. I’d imagine you’re right, and of course Kylie Minogue famously did too.

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  2. Hahah I love this!! It was such a delightful read

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    1. Thanks – it made me smile when I wrote it 🙂

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      1. I smiled when I read it :). Ok I’ll admit it was more of an ear to ear grin, much like the cheshire cat.

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  3. So witty! I love it!

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    1. Thanks so much

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  4. I enjoyed this short poem
    that I’m glad to have read,
    No train trip for me,
    I only moved to couch from bed.

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    1. A wise choice of journey

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  5. I bet you are really chuffed with this!

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